Chaotic. Emotional.
Even though the instruments are played in a very um... mechanical way there still a lot of feeling in the song. It got a slow-paced hip-hop beat going on in the background, a quite simple and catchy melody, and nice clear instruments. I feel like my head is in chaos over something, possibly by that something I just cannot have.
I guess the only improvement you could make on it is to humanize the instruments a bit more. Oh, and the ending is a bit harsh. I think a fading ending would fit better. Maybe.
Anyway, lovin' it!